Can someone really believe that there are other dimensions? Amelie,
she was a beautiful girl of 20 years, a pianist by profession, she always
played the piano and taught, she lived in a beautiful mansion with her
stepmother Ema and although she had everything in her life as material
things she suffered abuse, her family died and had suffered a
disappointment in love.
Amelie locked in herself, the only thing that bring life was when she
went to bed every night and she closed her eyes and traveled to another
a world where she could live there in a small cabin near the sea, could
touch the piano while looking out his window at nature and was so
lonely.
One day, while she was sleeping in her dream, appeared a man named
Henry who was attracted to her music but she immediately closed her
connection and woke up, she did not want anyone enter to her life
again even in dreams because she had a broken heart, so Amelie didn't
want to return to the nights to do the exercise of traveling to her
imaginary world.
One day Amelie decided to leave the mansion and with the fruit of her
work she bought a small cabin in the mountains, it was a humble place
but she was very happy, one day while she was playing piano a man
knocked on her door introducing himself and saying that he was her new
neighbor and, his name was Henry. She was surprised, she couldn't believe this situation because his name was like the man of the dream.
She sharply thanked him and dismissed him rudely because she doesn't want
again this man close to her.
Henry walked away sadly but he couldn't forget Amelie's beauty and
the way that she played the piano, he was impressed and every day Henry
approached Amelie's house to listen to her beautiful melodies from afar
while he also left sunflowers at her door.
Amelie knew that Henry from afar listened to her music and that him
was who left flowers at her door, so once she decided to go out and
invite him to take a walk around her cabin and in this way Amelie and
Henry began a love story. She talked to him about the trip to another
dimension while she slept and they realized that their destiny was to be
together and they were happy forever.
Hello dear Alejandra
ResponderBorrarAfter I read your story I have to say that it's quite interesting. I loved the plot and the story, mixing romance with fiction, but without making weird. About the characters, you built a clear description of the main character, Amelie; but you kept some mystery about Henry, which made the story interesting.
When we read a story, we usually try to connect it with something we know or have heard or maybe is relatable to us. Your story made me think about those theories about love and your soulmate, it made me feel happy, with hope about love, and that's great. Just as David M. Harris says, the story has to make the reader feel satisfied, it has to make you feel something, and that's exactly what happens with your story.
I just want to recommend you to write a title for your story.
Regards!
Adriana Martínez